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                Hey everyone, I just wanted to share a little bit of my own personal music I've written. This is a song that I wrote about a year or two ago. I have lyrics for it but I'm not really good at singing so please, feedback, is welcomed. I'll post the lyrics as well just don't go stealing them!Lyrics 
 the snow covered ground beckonsbeckons for blood to spill, now is the time to kill
 we will paint it red, oh yes we will
 so grab your brush and lets strike canvas
 lets make this masterpiece, lets make this masterpiece
 
 we paint with guns and swords
 the blood we use is yours
 streaking across the page
 its dripping slowly away
 smearing everything
 our masterpiece is almost done
 we watch the blood we spill run
 
 the ground shakes from below
 the armies cross the freezing snow
 hands black with frostbite
 blood runs down their knives
 screams fill the air
 they kill without care
 run blades through your chest
 until theirs no breath left
 
 we paint with guns and swords
 the blood we use is yours
 streaking across the page
 its dripping slowly away
 smearing everything
 our masterpiece is almost done
 we watch the blood we spill run
 
 cries of pain ring through
 ground covered a crimson hue
 bodies strewn across the field
 giving wolves a meal
 
 we paint with guns and swords
 the blood we use is yours
 streaking across the page
 its dripping slowly away
 smearing everything
 our masterpiece
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                Good job with the guitar. It was very smooth. I'd like to hear what it would sound like with vocals. Everyone thinks they cant sing. Every once in awhile one of those people can or just needs to get better.  | 
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                thanks guys glad you like it. as for the vocals I dont have a great way of recording them right now so when i do attempt to record them it makes my already not so good voice worse. but I just ordered a drum/synth pad so i will now be able to put together a full instrumental version. | 
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                So just wanted to throw this out there but I'm working on my own hardcore version of E.T. by Katy Perry and Call Me Maybe by Carly Rae Jepsen. Anyone interested in hearing parts of them? | 
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