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Offline Moquel  
#1 Posted : 06 November 2010 06:43:41(UTC)
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- RADIO VINE PRESENTS COLOR ME


A man, around his early 40's enters an dark room. He looks for an moment as Radio Vine, wearing an dark shirt is in the corner, writing fast as it seems her hand speeds up. Her head is shaking and she stops all of the sudden and looks at the door very slowly. The guy then pulls out an camera and sits it smoothly on his shoulder. Her serious looks- then devines her serious personality. Her dramatic makeup- then devines her extreme touch of art. She rises her hand up slowly with black fingernail polish and then she gets up slowly. She walks over to the guy. She hugs up for an minute. " I don't know what to do. It's very hard for me to handle it. You must leave.." She then walks on the side of him and walks out of the door. She looks back one more time as the guy follows. Outside, no car or limo sits. She starts to walk down the street, a very dry street where an homeless man sits on the side of an building and smokes. She looks at him- " where you suppose to be?" He replies, " In Hell." She looks an bit shocked and continues to walk. She starts to walk very slowly as she falls- she starts to breath hard. She places her hand on the floor. When she does that, a whole new enviornment is shown. She looks up. She gets up and sees an studio with equiqment and a place to record at. She walks in the box and everything in the room starts dark. We can only see her- the little light that is shing to her- you can see her perfectly with just touch of makeup and a broken heart t-shirt on. An typical- piano playing with an slow melody mixed in with an electro dance down-tempo beat starts to interpets the piano beat. The beat is not hard, it's more secure in an way. In the background, it seems writing effects are adding and crying and also pages turning. You hear more of that than the dance tempo beat where guitars and soft piano ballets are used. It's all one mixture- her voice is deeply soft on verses but advance to an hard soft rock voice on the hook and chrous.

COLOR ME-


[VERSE 1]
If you open me, will you know me?
You will probably look at me and assume who I'm suppose to be
I'm someone who dont even know why I'm here
You can touch but you cant feel harm
You can talk to me but it matters if you listen at all
I feel that I'm picture and I'm not drawn
I'm me.

[CHROUS]
Open up me and see what's inside of me
Open up my heart and see what where my heart.

[ HOOK]
Color me per-son-ality
Color me the girl I was born to be
I may want red to represent the pain in my life
I may want green to represent the joy and pain in my life
I may even want muli-colors to represent every part of me
(Every part of me)
Color me the full one.
Color me the only one who I can lay on and cry.
It can be an color that I can be proud.

[ VERSE 2]
How will you write me if I was an book?
How will you treat me if I was an hook?
Will you know me enough
to color me in
will you love me enough
Just to walk by me
Sometimes I get lost in my own mind
I dont know even why my mother cries at night
Why would you, I'm talking about myself
Color me until the picture is full.

[ CHROUS]
Open up me and see what's inside of me
Open up my heart and see where my heart.
Color me until I'm complete.
(Dont stop loving me)

[ HOOK]
Color me per-son-ality
Color me the girl I was born to be
I may want red to represent the pain in my life
I may want green to represent the joy and pain in my life
I may even want muli-colors to represent every part of me
(Every part of me)
Color me the full one.
Color me the only one who I can lay on and cry.
It can be an color that I can be proud.

[ BRIDGE]
Why you would start with me
(And not compete)
I saw the distance in me
I know my picture isnt the prettiest
and I'm know my face is hard to even manage
I'm like the girls who are looking for there selfs
and I'm like the picture, no meaning to itself.
I see my way though
but without you finshing me
I'm died and yet still confused.

[ DRAMATIC PIANO]

Lalala, Color me
Dadao, Release me
When you get done with me
I want to see my art and my love
released.

[ HOOK, X4]
Color me per-son-ality
Color me the girl I was born to be
I may want red to represent the pain in my life
I may want green to represent the joy and pain in my life
I may even want muli-colors to represent every part of me
(Every part of me)
Color me the full one.
Color me the only one who I can lay on and cry.
It can be an color that I can be proud.


The light fades away as pages start to fall from the ground- one paper is noticed, but the coloring sheet of her is NOT compete. We then hear an hard fall.


OOC: tell me what you think all : )

Edited by user 18 November 2010 08:49:50(UTC)  | Reason: Not specified

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#2 Posted : 06 November 2010 07:13:49(UTC)
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The song is very psychedelic, it's like whoa, what the fuck have I taken? But not bad work.
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#3 Posted : 06 November 2010 07:16:40(UTC)
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bikz wrote:
The song is very psychedelic, it's like whoa, what the fuck have I taken? But not bad work.
-Kamikaze Kate


" I don't think I was taking anything... I hope not. Thanks Kami."
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#4 Posted : 06 November 2010 07:21:02(UTC)
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#5 Posted : 06 November 2010 07:21:59(UTC)
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Stacey: I wasn't sure if I was gonna like this to be honest but I was pleasantly surprised. Great work.


" Thanks Stacey. Heard your show went well Stacey.. I hope it did as well. I will be watching it.. I promise."
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#6 Posted : 06 November 2010 07:24:33(UTC)
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#7 Posted : 06 November 2010 07:26:16(UTC)
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Glamazon: Loving this, sweethearts! Great job. ;)


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#8 Posted : 06 November 2010 18:58:18(UTC)
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Tyler: I love this! Its really Original :D Great job, keep it up! :)


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#9 Posted : 06 November 2010 19:38:47(UTC)
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#10 Posted : 07 November 2010 14:42:12(UTC)
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Offline Moquel  
#11 Posted : 07 November 2010 14:43:53(UTC)
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" It means a lot for something to realize my art. Thank you a lot Matty."
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#12 Posted : 07 November 2010 20:10:41(UTC)
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Moquel wrote:
Matticus wrote:
MattY: Holy Shit! I'm not gonna lie, i wasn't sure what to expect from you, and i had major doubts - but that, that was incredible! You are gonna be huge if you make song after song that good!


" It means a lot for something to realize my art. Thank you a lot Matty."
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MattY: Anytime, i seriously hope you continue like this
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Offline Moquel  
#13 Posted : 09 November 2010 07:06:28(UTC)
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Matticus wrote:
Moquel wrote:
Matticus wrote:
MattY: Holy Shit! I'm not gonna lie, i wasn't sure what to expect from you, and i had major doubts - but that, that was incredible! You are gonna be huge if you make song after song that good!


" It means a lot for something to realize my art. Thank you a lot Matty."
- Radio Vine


MattY: Anytime, i seriously hope you continue like this


" Of course. It's only the beginning for me.."
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#14 Posted : 14 November 2010 06:45:21(UTC)
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- COLOR ME


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NOVEMBER 17TH!


(Only Available on iTunes & Amazon)
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#15 Posted : 18 November 2010 08:49:11(UTC)
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#16 Posted : 18 November 2010 09:07:54(UTC)
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NOVEMBER 17TH!


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#18 Posted : 18 November 2010 09:12:50(UTC)
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NOVEMBER 17TH!


(Only Available on iTunes & Amazon)


Brittany: Good stuff hun, picking up the single!


" Thank you a lot baby! (smiles) looking forward to the tour Brit!"
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#19 Posted : 18 November 2010 09:14:06(UTC)
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